Frilian: Starting by inheriting the title of the Southern Hero

Chapter 65

I apologize to everyone here. After revising the outline at chapter 45, this book got worse and worse, so I'm not going to continue updating it.

First, as a new author, I really failed to grasp the pacing in the early stages, resulting in the plot being the same as the outline; second, I went into a misconception when designing the outline, and I was always thinking about how to fill in the big plot holes in the original work. Now it seems ridiculous. I should have just written my own plot. Why did I have to think about filling in the plot holes in the original work? Besides, no one can guess what the original author was thinking (laughs and cries).

I would like to express my sincere gratitude to all my friends for your continued support. Many of your comments have been very helpful. Problems that I didn't realize while writing have become clear after reading your comments, such as the plot pacing being too fast in the beginning, not paying enough attention to the character development and plot, and so on.

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